The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares
differences
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of
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first
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the first
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ten
countries
worldwide
according to
amount
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the amount
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for
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electricity
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the electricity
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they generated and consumed in 2014. It is noticeable that the figures
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China and
United
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the United
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States were much
more
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larger than
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the other
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eight
countries
.
While
most of
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individuals showed a trait which indicates more production and less consumption, Germany saw the only instance where the
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number exceeded the former one. Nationally speaking, China ranked
as
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the
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first with 5398
billion
kWh
of production and 5322
billion
kWh
of consumption, followed by
United
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States, which produced 4099
billion
kWh
and consumed 3866
billion
kWh
. Meanwhile, standing
at
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the
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third,
Russia witnessed the most significant gap in both two numbers compared with the
last
country.
Furthermore
, changes in
amount
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the amount
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of other
countries
demonstrated a trend
as
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steadily decreasing. When we compare the two given criteria, obviously, it is general that
countries
have produced more electricity than the amount they have consumed.
However
,
by contrast
, Germany was eye-attracting as it
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generated 526.6
billion
kWh
electricity
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of electricity
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, which was even more than the number they have consumed, as 582.5
billion
kWh
.
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