The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph conveys information about the
electricity
use of England citizens throughout summer
and winter
periods and during typical days. The pie chart reports how electricity
is used in homes on daily bases.
Overall
, from the line ,graph it is observed that demand for electricity
is considerably higher during winter
rather than summer
periods. The use of electrical components in summer
starts from a unit slightly lower than 2000, whereas
for winter
the point begins from about 3500 units. The units' scale in winter
fluctuates in the beginning, reaching its peak of 5000 at the end
. In summer
the consumption is around 1000-2000 units, reaching the highest point towards nighttime. Most of the electricity
is used to heat the apartment and the water, which is 52.5% of overall
usage. The lowest percentage of 15 is required for TV lighting, washing machines as well as
other householding items such
as vacuum cleaners and food mixers. A slightly higher scale of 17.5% is used for ovens, kettles and washing machines.
Generally, the need for electrical tools increases with the start of cold seasons, though the scale rises during nights both for summer
and winter
. More than half of the derived electricity
is used for heat, while
the second half is needed for household appliances.Submitted by adinaabdukerim150 on
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