The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.
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The map depicts an industrial area situated in Norbiton and
also
the planned growth of the site for the coming time.
Overall
, from the given data, it is clear that
the area is developed in the future with more facilities and roadways.
Furthermore
, the town currently has 8 factories and in the later period, it is planning to eliminate all of them. Additionally
, 7 housing spaces will be added.
Farmland will be shifted to the right side and a new bridge will be made on the river. It is noticeable that a new medical centre and shops are going to be organised in the south space. Also
, a road will be constructed on the northeast side.
Moreover
, in the east region, a school will be there and also
a pathway connected to the playground will be made. Apart from that, 3 housings will be situated near the study centre and play area.Submitted by undhadsmit5 on
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