The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The map represents the current industrial area and planned development for the future in the small town of Norbiton.
Overall
from the maps, it can be depicted that there will be major changes occurring in the area as all of the factories will be replaced by housing and various facilities like a school and shops will be built up.
Furthermore
, a playground will be developed just beside the school on the eastern side . The farmland will be replaced by building a new overbridge just above the river including a housing area in
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Currently
there is only 1 roundabout which later will be partnered with a new smaller roundabout on the southern road.
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Moreover
, new roads will be constructed to increase the connectivity of the three housing facilities constructed beside the river with a circular road in the centre. Adding to that, the Medical centre will be elongated with another group of housing and share boundaries with the roads leading to great connectivity.Submitted by undhadsmit5 on
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