some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays people are spoiled with too many
choices
, some believe it whereas
others argue it isn’t . in
my opinion , I believe that we have too many Capitalize word
In
choices
in our life. Such
as food
, dress , education , transport and many more. It gives us more benefits and some drawbacks too. Lets
discuss Replace the word
Let's
Let us
about
it Remove the preposition
apply
further
.
First of all , when we look at food
, earlier
days we had very limited restaurants and hotels to have it. Change preposition
in earlier
Although
, nowadays we could find enormous
amount of new Add an article
an enormous
food
stalls everywhere. For instance
, currently
people are opening Add a comma
,currently
food
trucks rather than restaurants. We could see food
trucks everywhere such
as near beaches or very crowded places near sports club
or colleges. Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
Furthermore
, folks are confused in choosing which place to go or what to eat. Their
spoiled with too many Replace the word
They're
They are
choices
. However
, there are some drawbacks for the age-old restaurant owners , when new entrepreneurs promote they face problems.
On the other hand
, inhabitants have too many choices
for education wise
. Add a hyphen
education-wise
Such
as so many new private schools , colleges , pre schools
, universities and other private classes can be seen everywhere. Nowadays student Add a hyphen
pre-schools
get
too many Change the verb form
gets
choices
and they distract from what they want to do and study. For instance
, when a pupil wants to study a particular course but the college offers them too many options by doing this
they get distract
and might choose Change the verb form
distracted
a
wrong course for them. Correct article usage
the
However
, there could be a benefit for them as well .
In conclusion , I think too many choices
nowadays could spoil the populations
, Fix the agreement mistake
population
however
it has some benefits too. I strongly believe it Add a comma
,however
is totally depends
on the individuals as I could agree Change the verb form
totally depends
and
disagree with Correct word choice
or
this
notion.Submitted by zahraasmi2001 on
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