the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits
The given line chart clearly illustrates the outcome of field research that has tried to shed light on the preferences of five separate Australian provinces’ dwellers for purchasing and consuming different types of
coffee
and tea during the last
4 weeks.
Overall
, with the exception of Adelaide’s citizens, a significant majority of Australian people displayed a marked tendency to go to the cafés for drinking a ready cup of coffee
or tea. However
, in all mentioned cities, a small minority has tended to buy fresh coffee
from the shops.
Throughout this
time frame, more than half of the residents of Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart and Brisbane preferred going to coffee
shops. Compared with other asserted cities, less than half of the Adelideans went to a café over the last
four weeks.
In terms of raw coffee
consumption, Sydney occupied the first rank at about 45%. Furthermore
, the Melbourn and Hobart placed the second and third ranks, respectively while
the Adelideans and the Brisbaneans purchased the least amount of fresh coffee
during this
period of time.
Moving into the amount of instant coffee
that is
consumed, it was purchased by around 55% of coffee
cosumers
in both Brisbane and Hobart. Correct your spelling
consumers
Whereas
, the number of individuals who are instant coffee
drinkers in the rest of Australian cities were
slightly lower, falling between 45% and 50%.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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