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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say that the government should take responsibility for planting trees while others opine that it is the responsibility of the citizens to plant trees in their houses. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Reforestation
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 is extremely necessary for the ecosystem. Some
individuals
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 think that the authorities should take
responsibility
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 for planting
trees
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whereas
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 others feel that it is
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responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of the
citizens
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 to plant
trees
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 in their homes. In my opinion, the lawmakers should only
responsible
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be responsible
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 for
reforestation
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. On the one hand, some think planting
trees
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 is
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responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of
citizens
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instead
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 of
governments
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. They believe
the
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that
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individuals
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 should make positive things
through
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by
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plantting
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planting
trees
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 in their accommodations in order to reduce Co2 emissions.
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 is because the most of greenhouse result
of
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from
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using
people
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 for their vehicles.
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, if
the
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apply
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plantting
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planting
trees
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 become
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responsibility
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a responsibility
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for
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of
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individuals
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,
this
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 step can raise
awarenss
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awareness
 among
people
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 about environmental issues
such
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 as
,
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apply
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deforetation
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deforestation
, pollution,
climate
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and climate
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 change.
On the other hand
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, I would like to agree with those who believe
the
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that
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reforestation
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 is
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responsibility
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the responsibility
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for
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of
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governments
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 rather than
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citizens
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the citizens
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. To being with, platting
trees
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 is expensive for
individuals
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people
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.
This
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 is
due to
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 the fact that
,
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trees
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 need water and better soil and maybe
chemcial
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chemical
 substances, which
this
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 factors can upset the budget of the public.
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, the
goverments
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governments
government
 earn taxes from
citizens
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.
Consequently
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, the
governments
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 should use
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this
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these
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 funds for
reforestation
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.
Moreover
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, if the
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governments
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government
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funding
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funds
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 the
platting
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planting
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trees
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 can save a considerable amount of money in
long-trem
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long-term
.
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 is because
the
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most
of
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serious
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the serious
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 diseases namely, cancer,
asthma
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and asthma
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 result
of
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 air pollution, and
then
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 platting
trees
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 play a significant role to absorb
Co2
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the Co2
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 footprint from the
atomsphere
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atmosphere
.
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,
the
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apply
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governments
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 can prevent their
citizens
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 to get diseases
as well as
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 reduce the pressure
in
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on
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healthcare
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the healthcare
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 system.
To sum up
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, In my perspective, the
governments
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 should only
responsible
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be responsible
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about
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for
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plantting
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planting
trees
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, because
it
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they
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 earn taxes
via
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from
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people
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, and
it
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they
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 can save
public
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the public
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 budget to cure
people
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 from serious
dieases
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diseases
such
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 as
,
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apply
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 cancer ,
asthma
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and asthma
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 .

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