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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many years have seen a
change
 in
climate
 and few people believe that they have to look for other alternatives to living with
climate
change
 rather than restricting it. I strongly oppose
this
 view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, restraining
climate
 from changing is basically the only way we can have a chance to save the world since it causes
weather
 changes in the future.
This
 will stop the human race from extinction
due to
 harsh
weather
 caused by
climate
change
.
For instance
, if we try by all means to avoid air pollution
this
 can actually help to prevent the
climate
 from changing which will cause drought
due to
 too much radiation from the sun.
Furthermore
, we can limit
climate
change
 by helping stop the ozone layer from continues breaking and causing deadly direct sunlight.
For example
, human beings can do programs for planting trees everywhere which will assist in avoiding the destruction of the ozone layer.
On the other hand
, we can learn to survive the changing in the
climate
 since beings are created in a way that adapts to
change
.
Thus
 when there are extreme
weather
 conditions caused by the
change
 of
climate
 we can always find means to survive these dangerous atmospheres, when it is too cold we put on warm clothes. In conclusion, I believe that preventing the changing of the
weather
 bears more weight than devising ways to survive in the conditions
due to
 the reason that people can plant more trees and avoid polluting the air
this
 will stop the
climate
 from changing.
However
, we can learn to survive harsh
weather
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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