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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a organization.What might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed.

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There has been ongoing debate regarding the topic of
self employment
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.
Although
 some individuals prefer to
work
 for a
company
, others believe to open their own
business
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businesses
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. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the reasons behind
this
 phenomenon and
also
 mention the drawbacks of being
self employed
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. At the outset, there are several causes why
group
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 of people want to start their own
company
, but the most prominent one lies in the fact that it gives freedom and flexibility to them.
In other words
, it would give them
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to take a decision without any restriction and they can
also
work
according
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 their own schedule. At present, no one likes to get
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orders from any other person. Apart from that, being
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an entreprenuer
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entreprenuer
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entrepreneur
entrepreneurs
 is
become
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 trending in the world. By
this
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,this
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 I mean that
,
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 people have a mindset that if they
work
 in a
comapny
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company
 and do
a
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hard
work
then
 it would be
a
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benefical
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beneficial
 to the
company
 not for them. They would only get
the
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 fixed monthly salary
not
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,not
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 a profit.
However
, there are
also
few
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 drawbacks
of
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 having own organization.
Firstly
, in the job employee get paid every month whether
company
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the company
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 is making
profit
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a profit
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 or loss. In
case
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the case
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 of business,
owner
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the owner
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 is getting paid or not it depends on the
company
that
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whether it is making
profit
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a profit
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 or loss.
Secondly
, having a ownership of
company
 sometimes
also
 affect
on
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the
individuals
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individual's
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 health as well. Since there are various kinds of
risk
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risks
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 in a business,
person
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people
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 would be in stress and
anxiety
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 which is harmful
for
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 their mental and physical health. From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that flexibility and freedom are the main reasons for
opt
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 to open
thier
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their
 own startup.
However
, it has few
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negatives
negative
such
 as it is not only risky but
also
 detrimental
for
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the
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health as well.
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