The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph represents the detail about the count of
males
and females who did study in two different times in three distinct years.
Overall
,it can be clearly seen that the students
of full-time
education
were more than part-time
in all the years in both genders.
As can be seen in the chart ,in
1970 to 1971 the Change preposition
from
number
of males
were
highest in Change the verb form
was
full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
education
which calculate near by
1000 Change preposition
apply
whereas
the part-time
students
were less than 200. In next
two given Correct article usage
the next
year
the Fix the agreement mistake
years
number
of male students
slightly reduced which noticed near by
800 in full-Change preposition
apply
time
education
and part-
Correct your spelling
part-time
time
males
Change the noun form
male
students
was roughly 200. While
,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
of males
Change the noun form
male
students
were above than 800 and 200 in full and part-time
education
orderly.
Probing further
, the female number
was approxmately
700 in Correct your spelling
approximately
full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
education
and less than 100 from 1970 to 1971 . The count of girls was almost 800 in full-time
education
which was 4 time
less in Change to a plural noun
times
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
education
in
Change preposition
from
the
1970 to 1971 .Change the article
apply
Moreover
, the maximum count of women study
in full-Wrong verb form
studying
time
education
which oberved
more than 1000 and properly 200 in part-Correct your spelling
observed
time
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