Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals claims

the

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physical athleticism determines the standard of achievement one can receive,

while

another group claims that

sport

is more based on sportsmanship and more mental

factors

.

This

essay will give reasons to support both sides and explain why they are equally important. On one hand, physical appearances are crucial

factors

in

sport

and physical

strength

determines the level of success.

This

is because

factors

such

as height, stamina, muscular flexibility, and

strength

are totally unrelated

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atheletic

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athletic

strengths and skills, but

no

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not

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all sports rely on all of them.

However

, if a person has

the

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atheletic

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athletic

strengths in the

sport

, he or she loves,

then

it

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she

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is likely to achieve higher standards in that

sport

compared to people who have less

atheticism

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athleticism

aestheticism

in that particular

sport

. Let us take

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football

as an

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example

. Michael Oher is an all-star

football

player that won a huge amount of rewards, but before he got elected into the team, he was just a big guy who does not even

had

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any idea of what

american

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football

is, but when the coach saw, he knew exactly that Michael has the physical

strength

suitable for

football

, he was big, he has long arms, and he is good at any ball exercises. Michael was immediately put on the team, and without a few weeks of practice, he turned from a blank piece of paper to the best of the best.

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is the story of

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a man with great

strength

turned

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who turned

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out to succeed in the

sport

.

On the other hand

,

the

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mental

strength

is

also

a crucial factor affecting an

athlete

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success.

This

is because without passion or faith supporting an

athlete

in his or her career, it is unlikely for that

athlete

to strive to the end or make any accomplishments at all.

For example

, a boxer does not have any

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or mental

strength

for boxing, and he only cares about the money, it is unsurprising if he gives up when he faces any challenges or threats.

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example

show

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how without mental

strength

, an

athlete

will never gain true passion and useful experience from a

sport

.

To conclude

, physical

factors

are

the

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essential

factors

for a

sport

, but

such

athleticism is worthless without the support of mental

strength

, which is why they are equally important.