The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates the

world

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's forests in five regions and the percentage of

timber

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in each region. It is evident that North

America

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have the highest percentage of

timber

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out of the 5 continents and Africa

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the biggest

forest

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in the

world

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coming in at 27%.

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Africa

have

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the largest

forest

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covering 27% of its land, North

America

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forest

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covers 25% of its ground.

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, Africa

have

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the least

timber

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amount

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amounting

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to only 9% given that they have the most

forest

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In contrast

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, North

America

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cuts the most trees for

timber

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reaching a percentage of 30 making them

having

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the worst deforestation problem out of every land.

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, South

America

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being

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only consist of 16% of

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forest

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the forest

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making it the

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world

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world's

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second smallest

forest

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actually

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and actually

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ranked as the

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world

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world's

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second highest deforestation rate shows that both

north

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North

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and south

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america

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America

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contributed the majority of logging.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, timber, america, forest with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

148 words

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