The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart illustrates the

world

's forests in five regions and the percentage of

timber

in each region. It is evident that North

America

have the highest percentage of

timber

out of the 5 continents and Africa

have

Correct subject-verb agreement

has

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the biggest

forest

in the

world

coming in at 27%.

While

Africa

have

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has

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the largest

forest

covering 27% of its land, North

America

forest

covers 25% of its ground.

However

, Africa

have

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has

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the least

timber

amount

Wrong verb form

amounting

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to only 9% given that they have the most

forest

In contrast

, North

America

cuts the most trees for

timber

reaching a percentage of 30 making them

having

Wrong verb form

have

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the worst deforestation problem out of every land.

Furthermore

, South

America

being

Unnecessary verb

apply

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only consist of 16% of

forest

Add an article

the forest

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making it the

world

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world's

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second smallest

forest

actually

Correct word choice

and actually

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ranked as the

world

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world's

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second highest deforestation rate shows that both

north

Capitalize word

North

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and south

america

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America

show examples

contributed the majority of logging.

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