The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the
world
's forests in five regions and the percentage of timber
in each region. It is evident that North America
have the highest percentage of timber
out of the 5 continents and Africa have
the biggest Correct subject-verb agreement
has
forest
in the world
coming in at 27%.
While
Africa have
the largest Change the verb form
has
forest
covering 27% of its land, North America
's forest
covers 25% of its ground. However
, Africa have
the least Change the verb form
has
timber
amount
to only 9% given that they have the most Wrong verb form
amounting
forest
. In contrast
, North America
cuts the most trees for timber
reaching a percentage of 30 making them having
the worst deforestation problem out of every land.
Wrong verb form
have
Furthermore
, South America
being
only consist of 16% of Unnecessary verb
apply
forest
making it the Add an article
the forest
world
second smallest Change noun form
world's
forest
actually
ranked as the Correct word choice
and actually
world
second highest deforestation rate shows that both Change noun form
world's
north
and south Capitalize word
North
america
contributed the majority of logging.Change the capitalization
America
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, timber, america, forest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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