The line graph shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meats in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
The line graph illustrated
fish
and meat consumption per week
in a European country. Overall
, fish
ingestion every week
has always been on
Change preposition
at
the
lowest since 1979 until 2004. Change the word
its
Additionally
, beef is the most popular amongst the europeans
in 1979 which marks the most ingested in a Change the capitalization
Europeans
week
for a single person of 220 grams
.
Looking at the details, lamb and chicken was
eaten 150 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
grams
and 140 grams
respectively weekly by an individual in 1979, although
lamb will see a decrease in trend and eventually reached a bottom of 60 grams
a week
while
chicken continues to climb and hit the highest in the graph at 240 at the year 2004.
Now turning to beef and fish
, we can see that beef was the most popular meat in 1979 will start declining in 1987 and at last
fall
to 110 Replace the word
fell
grams
in one week
coming in second as the choice of meat by europe people in 2004, while
fish
have always been the least favourite food since 1979 starting at 51 grams
and come to only 49 grams
of fish
weekly in 2004.Submitted by honzent99 on
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