Demand for gas and oil is increasing, so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is necessary. Do the advantages of damaging such areas outweigh the disadvantages?

Gas

and

oil

has been

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important fuel for generating electricity or cars and as the population grows, the demand for these fuels increased exponentially which makes sense that finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is necessary, but is damaging remote and untouched areas for the benefit of harvesting more

gas

and

oil

worth it? In

this

discussion, I will be stating the advantages and disadvantages of causing damage

the

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areas with

gas

and

oil

deposits and write my opinion

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whether the advantages of destroying new uninhabited

area

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outweigh the disadvantages.

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mining for more

gas

and

oil

will help with generating more electricity to keep cold countries people warm and help factories to produce more necessities for its country,

For instance

, a cold country with an average temperature of negative in winter needs a heater in every households or buildings to endure the cold temperature. Another example would be that food might not have enough supply if a factory

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not run

due to

lack

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of

gas

and

oil

to operate.

However

, harvesting

gas

and

oil

will lead to

animals

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extinction and pollution of that

area

.

For example

, when building the facilities to harvest

gas

and

oil

needs to deforest the

area

resulting in chasing out

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amount of animal species living in that

area

. As the buildings for harvesting fuels

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, the air, water, and ecosystem will totally be destroyed causing it to be an uninhabitable land for a long time. In conclusion, harvesting

gas

and

oil

will help a country to grow by destroying the ecosystem in that

area

causing animal extinctions.

This

decision will in the end come back to haunt us as plants are more scarce resulting in lesser animals which in return reduced food

producion

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production

for humans.

Therefore

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believe that finding

a better

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alteratives

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for

gas

and

oil

is a better solution for all lives.