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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high School programs (for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports youngsters).To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some
kids
 spend their
time
 only with their immediate household
while
 growing up.
However
, others get
time
 to spend with their friends, cousins and relatives. I think the second type would be a healthier option since they can improve their social skills from a very young age itself by spending
time
 with more
people
.
Firstly
, the
kids
 who grow up with their immediate family will find that they have more
time
 than others.
Due to
this
 reason, they might spend
time
 by themselves more, and
hence
, they can get addicted to mobile games, browsing, or any
such
 habits. Sometimes, these habits might develop into healthy hobbies, but there are chances that they will suffer from a lot of personality disorders, communication problems, etc. if they spend more
time
 by themselves only.
Hence
, I think it's healthier for a kid, to grow up with more family around them.
In addition
,
kids
 who grew up with relatives and friends tend to be more flexible with sharing their own things. They develop sharing mentality from a very young age itself since they would not receive any special treatment
due to
 the number of
people
 in the family. More the
people
 in a family, the more flexible they will become.
Also
, they will have more
people
 to share their personal issues when they cannot share some uncomfortable things with their mother or father.
On the contrary
, one disadvantage is that they can become more distracted from their studies or ambition since they get only less
time
 for their own hobbies or passions. In conclusion, I believe
kids
 who grow up with more family around them have more advantages, but they have to make sure that they have enough
time
 for their own passion and hobbies, and they don't lose their individuality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Civic duty
  • Altruism
  • Empathy
  • Community engagement
  • Social cohesion
  • Philanthropy
  • Volunteerism
  • Work ethic
  • Social responsibility
  • Teamwork
  • Nonprofit sector
  • Service learning
  • Experiential education
  • Moral education
  • Integration
  • Equal opportunities
  • Skill development
  • Youth empowerment
  • Personal growth
  • Grassroots
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