The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate data about
sales
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of two commodities coffee and bananas in five different countries in two specific years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, among the five countries the UK sold the most amount of coffee ,
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however
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Sweden
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had the least
sales
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. For another product, bananas, Switzerland was on the top list but
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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were on the bottom list. In 1999,
Denmark
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sold 1.8
million
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of euros coffee which was the highest at that time,
while
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0.8
million
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euros was for
Sweden
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. After five years, in 2004, all countries had an increase in their
sales
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. The UK
sales
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rose more than ten times from 1.5
million
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to 20
million
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.
Sweden
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's
sales
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doubled from 3 to 6
million
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.
Denmark
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and
Sweden
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rose to about 0.2
million
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and reached 2 and 1
million
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respectively. In 1999, Switzerland sold 15
million
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which by far had the most proportion among others and Belgium just sold under 1
million
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. There was a rise in
sales
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for Switzerland, The UK, and Belgium in 2004 and
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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sales
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decreased by about 2
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, sweden, denmark, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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