fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are encourge to use energy source, such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Non-renewable

sources

are used since ancient times for many activities

such

as the production of electricity, fuel, and many more, but these

sources

are hard to generate if they are used up. That's why some masses are motivated to use those

sources

which can be replaced and renewed

due to

the many advantages

such

as cost-effectiveness and ease of renewal.

However

, I believe that it is a positive aspect. The first reason behind my phenomenon is cost-effectiveness. Wind and Solar

energy

both are natural

sources

. They do not need to store for many

years

hence

, no cost of production is used to generate these which means citizens can save money. Another reason is renewable nature. These

sources

exist in your ecosystem for thousands of

years

, and as compared to coal, oil and nuclear

energy

their supply is finite but Air, Solar

energy

, and hydropower they are infinite.

Thus

, the future depends upon nature,

also

helpful for employment opportunities.

For example

, In Germany, the government is going to set up a nuclear power plant, which results in more job vacancies in the economy and they are claiming to hire 30,000 people in a few

years

Furthermore

, wind

energy

and solar power do not cause pollution

on the other hand

, the production of coal, fuel, and diesel has many hazardous effects on animals and humans when they are burnt and stored for a longer period of time.

For instance

according to

a report by Environment India, If people stop using fossil fuels in upcoming

years

it will help to reduce global emissions by up to 70% by 2050,

as a result

, climate changes, loss of biodiversity, and weather conditions will be better.

To sum up

, non-renewable

sources

are used for a longer period of time and help the economy in various developments, but

according to

me the masses should depend on natural

energy

if they want to save the environment and cost

as well as

if they are sustainable.

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