It is sometimes said that people who do work that is physically hard should be paid as much as people who do work that needs high level qualifications. Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
there is a contentious argument over whether
job
Use synonyms
satisfaction is an important or high-paid
job
Use synonyms
.
While
Linking Words
some people believe that it should be lower than the
jobs
Use synonyms
that require qualification, others, myself included, suggest that they should be paid as much as
jobs
Use synonyms
which require qualifications, because not only are these
jobs
Use synonyms
health-compromising but they are
also
Linking Words
short-lasting. On the one hand, I hold the view that most
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
physically strenuous
jobs
Use synonyms
carry some health
hazard
Fix the agreement mistake
hazards
show examples
, so the worker should be paid higher to compensate for the well-being jeopardy. These
jobs
Use synonyms
require a strong
body
Use synonyms
to meet the qualification of performing it,
however
Linking Words
,
use
Correct article usage
the use
show examples
of
body
Use synonyms
part
Fix the agreement mistake
parts
show examples
repeatedly will soon produce damage to that part which is involved in the movement.
For instance
Linking Words
,
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
job
Use synonyms
that requires manual ploughing
need
Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
show examples
strong shoulders and hands, yet after a short time,the shoulder joint will become painful
due to
Linking Words
overuse. So it is expected that the payment should compensate for the health compromise.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, I personally believe that physically demanding
jobs
Use synonyms
are not a permanent career
due to
Linking Words
the increase in age. Since the physical power will fade by getting older, labourers in physically demanding
works
Fix the agreement mistake
work
show examples
are obliged to change their work after a few years, when their
body
Use synonyms
fitness is diminished for the
job
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
, many workers in strenuous
jobs
Use synonyms
are young, and when they grow older, they have to change their
jobs
Use synonyms
to
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
less physically demanding
one
Correct pronoun usage
ones
show examples
, which most probably has a lower income. It is logical
to conclude
Linking Words
that
jobs
Use synonyms
that require physical tenacity should have high wages. I consider that they are trading their
body
Use synonyms
health and strength with their income, so it is fair to compensate
this
Linking Words
trade with payment as much as those with qualifications, who trade their qualification with salary. As these labourers will soon lose their energy and
body
Use synonyms
vigour, I suggest that they should be appropriately insured to have an income in case of disability or
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
show examples
in age.
Submitted by elnazkarimi1386 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical labor
  • Highly qualified positions
  • Intrinsic value
  • Societal function
  • Physical toll
  • Economic perspective
  • Supply and demand
  • Salary disparities
  • Cultural perceptions
  • Specialized training
  • Minimum wage adjustments
  • Nuanced arguments
What to do next:
Look at other essays: