It is sometimes said that people who do work that is physically hard should be paid as much as people who do work that needs high level qualifications. Do you agree or disagree?
there is a contentious argument over whether
job
satisfaction is an important or high-paid job
. While
some people believe that it should be lower than the jobs
that require qualification, others, myself included, suggest that they should be paid as much as jobs
which require qualifications, because not only are these jobs
health-compromising but they are also
short-lasting.
On the one hand, I hold the view that most of
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jobs
carry some health hazard
, so the worker should be paid higher to compensate for the well-being jeopardy. These Fix the agreement mistake
hazards
jobs
require a strong body
to meet the qualification of performing it, however
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job
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needs
due to
overuse. So it is expected that the payment should compensate for the health compromise.
On the other hand
, I personally believe that physically demanding jobs
are not a permanent career due to
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body
fitness is diminished for the job
. For example
, many workers in strenuous jobs
are young, and when they grow older, they have to change their jobs
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, which most probably has a lower income.
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to conclude
that jobs
that require physical tenacity should have high wages. I consider that they are trading their body
health and strength with their income, so it is fair to compensate this
trade with payment as much as those with qualifications, who trade their qualification with salary. As these labourers will soon lose their energy and body
vigour, I suggest that they should be appropriately insured to have an income in case of disability or increase
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