The diagrams illustrate the means of transportation used by university students from the periods 2004 and 2009.

The diagrams illustrate the means of transportation used by university students from the periods 2004 and 2009.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams illustrate the means of transportation used by university students from the periods 2004 and 2009.
The given pie charts present various types of students getting into the university in 2004 and 2009.
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, in both ,years the least used category of transportation was the train.
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the highest in 2004 was a car,
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after 5 years the bus was the most used method of reaching one university.

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