You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words.

Dear
Mr.
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George, My name is Georgia Henry, working as a Financial Manager, in
Etobicoke
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branch of your company. Today I have been writing to request you to migrate me to the main office of our company for a half year. To
intiate
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with, I want to gain some experience
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working
in
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there, to understand the approval paycheck procedures.
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,
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the past few weeks,
me
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and my
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colleagues
are
encountring
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encountering
with
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huge
differnces
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differences
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in the statement, it could assist me to get
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the problem. In the
mean time
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, I would handle the issues of
this
location with
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regular
meetings with my
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and keep on updating you as well. As
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year, I was taking care of all the invoices from my home and it had not created any
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. I hope you would agree with my decision as well, I require your assistance in doing some
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for me. Please do arrange my meeting with
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from that place, and let them know about my visit. Hope you
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will
take care of it and I request you to contact me any time for
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sincerely, Georgia Henry.
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