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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words

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Dear Mr George, My name is Georgia Henry, working as a Financial Manager, in the Etobicoke branch of your company. Today, I have been writing to request you to migrate me to the main office of our company for a half year because I have been working on a new project and require certain data. To initiate with, I want to gain some experience working there, to understand the approval paycheck procedures. Over the past few weeks, I and my colleagues are encountering huge differences in the statements, which could assist me to understand the problem. In the meantime, I would handle the issues of
this
 location by scheduling regular meetings with my teammates and keep on updating you as well. As the previous year, I was taking care of all the invoices from my home and it had not created many issues, so we can do the same. I hope you would agree with my decision as well, I require your assistance in doing some bookings for me. Please do arrange my meeting with the manager from that place, and let them know about my visit. Hope you will take care of it, I request you to contact me any time for
further
 information. Yours sincerely, Georgia Henry.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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