You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria Say what is wrong with it Suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir/ Madam. I am Md. Asim, a student of your college. I have been studying at

this

esteemed institution for the past two years. I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice, the modifications that are required at the cafeteria. I am pleased with the variety of food

that is

being served. The food is luscious

as well as

pocket friendly. I usually prefer having a sandwich and a cup of coffee as it fulfils my hunger. I extend my appreciation to the chef who prepares fresh food and the server who always serves it piping hot.

Moreover

, I am surprised every time I visit the lunch area and have always seen it neat and tidy.

However

, the distance from the classroom to the cafeteria is ten

minutes

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walk which takes up to

one-third

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time

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of time

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of the recess.

This

is a major drawback , as the majority of students face similar problems. I would appreciate it if you can extend the break timings or make a special arrangement to relocate the cafeteria’s location in the same building as the classroom. Thank you, Your’s sincere, Ms Jaffer