You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. -You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. in your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir/ Madam, Hi ,
This
is Mamta Rani. I am writing
this
letter to apply for a job that you posted. Having said that, I am basically from Punjab and as you know, in Punjab, Punjabi is the language everyone speaks and you are looking for a teacher who can teach your children
this
language. on top of it, I have experience in
this
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language for
language
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language for
3 years and I
also
worked as a childcare nurse as well, so I can take care of your kids when you have
an
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urgent work. I want
this
job because I am looking for an environment like a family where I am treated as a family member and provide my best in taking care of
your
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my
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children as much as
i
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can. I hope you will consider my application. Waiting for your positive response. best regards, Mamta Rani
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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