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You recieved a letter from a friend who asked for a recommendation letter from you for the job that he/she is asking for . Write a letter to your manager. 1. Explain how well you know this person. 2. Describe how this person works. 3. Why do you think this person is suitable for job.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter for the recommendation of my friend Kamal, who has recently applied for
job
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a job
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vaccancyin
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vacancy in
 your company as an Insurance broker through
indeed
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Indeed
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. I know her since my childhood. She is
great
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a great
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,
hard working
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 and
very
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panctual
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punctual
 person. She would
alwayspreffer
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always prefer
always refer
 to finish her designed task on time, as it becomes her priority.
Moreover
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 she is
a
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apply
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multi-tasking and can work as a
team-leader
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 very well. She is a perfect match for
this
 position as she has got a lot of experience in
this
 field ( as mentioned in her CV ).
Also
, a
well organised
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 and confident
personlike
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person like
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her
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here
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 can
fulfill
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 all of your
company
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company's
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 needs. I hope that you would really give her a chance to step into
the
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 big organisation like you and give her a chance to learn and grow more. Your's faithfully Amanpreet Kaur
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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