The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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The line graph illustrates how

water

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was used by different categories around the world from 1900 to 2000 and the table presents the percentage of that consumed in 2 nations in the year 2000.

It is clear that

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there was an upward tendency in global

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use by not only agriculture but

also

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industrial and domestic utilization.

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, a higher quantity of population

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wider irrigated land in Brazil resulted in a bigger consumption of

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per person, compared to those in the Democratic Republic of Congo. As can be seen, the amount of

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used by agriculture was recorded to be at the top of the list with 500 km3 in 1900, after that, it kept rising and reached a peak of 3000 km3 in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure for that by both industries and households stood at nearly 0 km3, yet

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over one century, it climbed to over 1000 km3 and 500 km3 respectively.

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, in 2000, Brazil had a larger watered area with 26500 km2, followed by only 100 km2 of that in the Republic of Congo.

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, there were 176 million citizens living in Brazil, in comparison with only 5.2 million in the Republic of Congo.

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, the sum of

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consumption by each individual in the former country was higher, at 359 m3,

whereas

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the total of that in the latter country took up just 8 m3.

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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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in some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.