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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
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The bar graph illustrates the qualifications that have been achieved by the
people
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 from the countries
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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.
Overall
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, Singaporeans have the highest rate of
people
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 who have Science qualifications compared to the citizens of
Malaysia
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.
Malaysia
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 ranks first with 65% of
people
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 who have no Science qualification
while
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Singapore
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 has 60%. When it comes to school leaving exams, again
Malaysia
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 is on top having almost 40% and
Singapore
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 only has 30%.
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,
Singapore
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 has the most
people
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 with Bachelor's
degree
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 related to Science than
Malaysia
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 with 20% and 10% respectively. Interestingly, for
people
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 with a master's degree, both nations have the same amount of students being 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, malaysia, singapore with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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