The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The bar graph illustrates the qualifications that have been achieved by the
people
from the countries
Malaysia
and
Singapore
.
Overall
, Singaporeans have the highest rate of
people
who have Science qualifications compared to the citizens of
Malaysia
.
Malaysia
ranks first with 65% of
people
who have no Science qualification
while
Singapore
has 60%. When it comes to school leaving exams, again
Malaysia
is on top having almost 40% and
Singapore
only has 30%.
On the other hand
,
Singapore
has the most
people
with Bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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related to Science than
Malaysia
with 20% and 10% respectively. Interestingly, for
people
with a master's degree, both nations have the same amount of students being 5%.
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