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The bar chart gives.information about how many Japanese tourists travelled overseas over a 10-year period from1985 to 1995,while the line graph illustrates Australia 's share of Japanese tourist market during the same timefirame

The bar chart gives.information about how many Japanese tourists travelled overseas over a 10-year period from1985 to 1995,while the line graph illustrates Australia 's share of Japanese tourist market during the same timefirame
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The bar chart gives information about how many
Japanese
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 tourists travelled overseas over a 10-year
period
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 from 1985 to 1995,
while
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 the line graph illustrates Australia`s share of
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Japanese
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the Japanese
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 tourist market during the same timeframe.
Overall
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, the number of
Japanese
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 people travelling abroad followed a consistent upward trend, with only one slight decline in
early
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 1990s, and showed the highest figure
at the end
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 of the
period
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.
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, the percentage of tourists from Japan to Australia increased gradually, regardless of a sudden dip in the middle of the
period
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. In 1985, only around 5
million
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Japanese
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 individuals travelled abroad, the least number throughout the entire
period
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. In the following five years,
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,
this
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 number more than doubled to about 11
million
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 before experiencing a negligible drop to just over 10
million
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 in 1991.
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, there was consistent growth in the next four years to
finally
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 peak at 15
million
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 in 1995. As for Australia`s share of Japan`s tourist market, there was a similar continuous growing pattern. The percentage of
Japanese
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travelers
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travellers
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 who visited Australia saw a dramatic rise from the start of the
period
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, increasing from only 2% in 1985 to approximately 5% in 1989. Having seen a sudden fall to almost 4% in the following year, the figure showed a gradual upward trend until 1994 and reached
the
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 peak of just over 6%.
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, in 1995,
this
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 decreased slightly to 6%.
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