The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The maps provided compares how much Norbiton’s industrial area changes between present and planned future development.
It is clear that
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the industrial area will appear many housings, and buildings
such
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as
playground
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playgrounds
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, shops,
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and school
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school
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schools
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.
Additionally
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, the northern of the region witnessed the widening of a road crossing the river. At present, the industrial region is located east of the town of Norbiton. The large traffic roundabout is located in the middle. There are only two seams to the traffic roundabout. Meanwhile, only factories are built in the industrial area of
this
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town. In future development plans, the northern region will see the mushrooming of the road crossing the river, and houses will be constructed across
this
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river.
While
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the factories are demolished, there will be an appearance of housing and public areas in the future. The south of the riverside will witness the arrival of multiple households and playgrounds. Meanwhile, there will be the construction of public buildings
such
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as shops, medical centre, and school
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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