More and more people are using internet to do their tasks rather that doing in person for example shopping bankings hotel bookings. Do you think tha advantage outweigh disadvantage

Technology has

took

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a toll on

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an individuals

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individuals

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life.So they

intends

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to accomplish their tasks

such

as banking,shopping and hotel bookings online

instead

of performing them by visiting the concerned places.

Eventhough

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Even though

this

scenario has some adverse ramifications,I believe that the merits of

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overrides are demerits and will discuss the rationales to prove my consideration in upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand,

this

effects

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the health of the society.To justify, when people perform their

taskers

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tasks

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like transfer of money,

shopping

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and shopping

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for necessities through

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internet

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,they become

a

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couch

potato

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.

Consequently

,it not only

increase

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their obesity level but

also

surge

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the chances of cardiovascular diseases

due to

lack of

movements

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.

Besides

this

, the chances of

frauds

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are more in performing activities online

either

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it is to transfer the funds or purchase the commodities.

For example

the

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individuals need to fill

their

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personal details to send and receive money and to make any bookings.

As a result

, the hackers get unauthorised access to confidential data whether the credit card details or other personnel information and destroy it.

On the other hand

,internet banking, shopping or hotel bookings is

any

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time

and anywhere

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service. As the conventional methods to perform these tasks are limited

up

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to business hours only.

However

, with the help of applications

for example

Amazon ,Flipkart and Urbanic, citizens can order any product anytime

as well as

by sitting at their homes. Which is

more

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convenient way

.

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Apart from

this

, can be transferred to the inhabitants

which

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are even

at

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the other side of the globe just with a few clicks. what is more, pre-bookings for the hotels and tickets

allows

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the

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people to enjoy better facilities.

For instance

,

is

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if

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individuals book the hotels online they provide them facilities

such

as the preferred decorations in case of parties and occasions which makes their stay more fruitful.

Hence

,performing the jobs online is an effective and efficient way which saves

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time

as well as

efforts

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. In conclusion,

although

this

scenario can

leads

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to various frauds and hackings,I opine that

this

provides the convenience to people to perform their jobs wear and when they want so

this

amenity can be fruitful provided that these strong passwords and security will be used.