The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
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The bar chart compares the ratio of
people
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qualifying in science in 2 different Asia nations.
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it is clear that
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while
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most
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experience no qualification in science, the opposite is true for
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having master's degrees.
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, the percentage of Malayans is bigger than that of Singaporeans in almost factors. As can be seen in the chart, the ratio of
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having master's degrees is the same in the two countries, particularly at about 13%.
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, the percentage of Singaporeans experiencing Bachelor's qualifications is twice as big as Malayans ones, specifically at 20% and 10% respectively. Looking at the chart for more details, the differences between Singapore and Malaysia
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in the figures for school leaving exams and no qualifications in sciences are the same at about 5%. To be precise, the number of Malyans having no degrees in science hits the biggest point in the bar at 65%.
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