A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighbourhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know

Dear Kaswa I hope you are doing wonders in your university.I am writing
this
letter regarding a matter which concerns me significantly.I came to know that you are not only planning to relocate but
also
buying a house in my society.I would wholeheartedly suggest you reconsider your decision. I've decided to leave
this
society because of its hostile environment.It's not tranquil here anymore.
Furthermore
,I am perpetually stressed and anxious about ongoing violence and robberies.
In addition
to it, street thefts and snatching have increased to alarming levels,
subsequently
,there is no point in living in a perilous neighbourhood.
However
,I'd like to suggest better alternatives which guarantee a state of an art living facility
along with
a safe environment,
conversely
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they are not cheap.Kindly visit Defence Housing Authority,as it is a promising society with a flourishing future,
hence
,it will be a great investment.I am looking forward to hearing from you and I hope you will consider my opinion. Best Regards Ahmad Hassan Nadeem
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