The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicles* between 2006 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the worldwide amount of sold
vehicles
that consumed both fuel and electricity from 2006 to 2009.
Overall
, the US was a leader in global
sales
in the years 2006,2007 and 2008. In comparison, in 2009 the highest amount of sold
vehicles
was in Japan. During the given period
the
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global
sales
in Japan increased gradually from more than 50000 in 2006 to approximately 335
thousand
units in 2009. In the same period of
time
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the US sold slightly over 250
thousand
vehicles
in 2006,
then
peaked at the figure of 350000 in 2007 and showed a downward trend accounted for 290
thousand
sold
vehieles
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vehicles
in 2009. Between 2006 and 2009, worldwide
sales
in other countries represented
steady
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increase from 50000 in 2006 to just over 110
thousand
in 2009. Comparing the global
sales
in
years
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the years
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2006 and 2009 there can be seen a more than twice increase in figures from 360
thousand
sold
vehicles
in 2006 to 740000 in 2009.
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