Nowadaya both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. this was not so in past. what may be the root cause of this behaviour? discuss the reasons and possible results.
In past, time only
female
were using Fix the agreement mistake
females
beauty
Use synonyms
care
but Use synonyms
now a days
, Correct the word
nowadays
male
are Fix the agreement mistake
males
also
using Linking Words
beauty
Use synonyms
care
which leads to Use synonyms
waste
of money. Correct article usage
a waste
Male
are Fix the agreement mistake
Males
also
spending large Linking Words
amount
of money Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
in
Change preposition
on
beauty
Use synonyms
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
products
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
have
both effects good and bad.
Change the verb form
has
Firstly
, There are positive results of using makeup Linking Words
is
as Unnecessary verb
apply
people
do makeup they can hide their dark Use synonyms
skin
. As Use synonyms
people
will buy more Use synonyms
products
Use synonyms
than
a company needed to Change preposition
apply
produses
more and more production which helps Correct your spelling
produce
produces
a
Correct article usage
apply
people
to get employment. As the country will do high production Use synonyms
then
they can even export it Linking Words
also
. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
it
a lady will go to Correct your spelling
if
salon
and will do makeup Add an article
the salon
a salon
then
Linking Words
people
will get employment. There are so many Use synonyms
products
are there which are good for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
body
Add an article
the body
which
can make Correct word choice
and
Use synonyms
people
Change noun form
people's
Use synonyms
body
soft. There are some Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
lotion
which can Fix the agreement mistake
lotions
reduses
dry Correct your spelling
reduce
reduces
skin
. As women will look beautiful it will give Use synonyms
her
power and will make Correct pronoun usage
them
her
good-looking.
Correct pronoun usage
them
Secondly
, there Linking Words
are
Change the verb form
is
os
many side effects of using Correct your spelling
so
skin
Use synonyms
care
Use synonyms
productes
Correct your spelling
products
such
as it Linking Words
damage
the Change the verb form
damages
skin
. It Use synonyms
hide
the real Change the verb form
hides
skin
of a person. As men and women will spend more income Use synonyms
in
buying Change preposition
on
a
skincare Correct article usage
apply
iteams
will make unbalance in purchasing power. For ,example if a girl or boy will use Correct your spelling
items
beauty
Use synonyms
care
Use synonyms
sinces
, Correct your spelling
since
thier
childhood Correct your spelling
their
then
Linking Words
there
Replace the word
their
skin
will be damaged by Use synonyms
there
old age and will make Correct your spelling
their
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
body
black.
In conclusion, some Use synonyms
skin
Use synonyms
products
are good for Use synonyms
Use synonyms
body
but, not all. Government should increase Add an article
the body
tax
on those items which harm Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
people
. EverybodyUse synonyms
,
should set Remove the comma
apply
limit
for their own on using it. The public should use good and Add an article
a limit
the limit
Correct your spelling
healthy
heathly
Correct your spelling
healthy
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