4.Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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World

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Cup, Olympics, The Grand Slam etc are a few examples of sports that allows the hosting

country

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to either showcase its state of art technological advancement and traditions or expose public relations disaster.

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essay will explain the benefits of hosting international sports in a

country

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. First of all, it is important to keep in mind, every detailed activity will be live telecasted by media to the entire

world

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, when a nation gets the opportunity to welcome other counties into their hometown, they would want everything to be perfect. Right from the basic needs to the luxury. Athletes

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different nations will get a chance to witness the traditions of an inviting

country

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, When the Olympics was hosted in India in the year 2004, the

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Prime Minister made all arrangements and the city

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lit up lights, and the roads were cleaned and maintained. Apart from the infrastructure, a separate hall was set up to showcase the traditional dance- Kathak and the local food to the

world

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at a large platform.

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to that, hosting international sports

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increases the chances of maintaining good terms and relations with

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other member countries.

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good relationship will have

a politically long-term benefits

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to each other.

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, the

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FIFA

Fifa

world

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cup match held in Qatar in 2023, had helped Europe in getting oil from Qatar.

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happened only after the matches that were held for 2 months

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Commonwealth

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the Commonwealth

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games

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are indeed a platform to show the qualities of the home

country

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, provided the economic conditions are kept in mind and maintained honestly.

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