The given graph depicts the average figure of British citizens used to travel everyday by car,bus or train from 1970 to 2030.

The given graph depicts the average figure of British citizens used to travel everyday by car,bus or train from 1970 to 2030.
The given graph depicts the average figure of British citizens
used
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who used
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to travel
everyday
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every day
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by
car
,
bus
or
train
from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, the
number
of
Uk
traveler
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traveller
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commuting by
car
and
train
have had an upward trend ,
while
the
number
of
Uk
people
traveling
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travelling
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by
bus
has had a downward trend . In 1970, the average
number
of
Uk
citizens
traveling
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travelling
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by
car
and
train
was 5 and 2
millions
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million
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, it has
leveled
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levelled
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out at 7 and 4
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million
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millions
in 2023.The
number
of British
people
traveling
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travelling
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by
car
and
train
has increased to 2
millions
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million
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each after 2023.From 1970 to 2023 ,many
people
saw the
number
of
UK
commuters
traveling
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travelling
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by
bus
has
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drop
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dropped
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significantly ,it has declined from 4 to over
millions
. By 2030 the
number
of
people
who
traveling
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travel
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by
car
is expected to reach 9
millions
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million
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and it is predicted that the
number
of
train
user
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users
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will increase to nearly 5
millions
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million
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.
By contrast
, the
number
of
bus
user
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users
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is predicted to decrease to 3
millions
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million
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, number, uk, people, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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