The given graph depicts the average figure of British citizens used to travel everyday by car,bus or train from 1970 to 2030.
The given graph depicts the average figure of British citizens
used
to travel Correct pronoun usage
who used
everyday
by Replace the word
every day
car
,bus
or train
from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, the number
of Uk
traveler
commuting by Change the spelling
traveller
car
and train
have had an upward trend ,while
the number
of Uk
people
traveling
by Change the spelling
travelling
bus
has had a downward trend .
In 1970, the average number
of Uk
citizens traveling
by Change the spelling
travelling
car
and train
was 5 and 2 millions
, it has Change to singular
million
leveled
out at 7 and 4Change the spelling
levelled
Change to singular
million
millions
in 2023.The number
of British people
traveling
by Change the spelling
travelling
car
and train
has increased to 2 millions
each after 2023.From 1970 to 2023 ,many Change to singular
million
people
saw the number
of UK
commuters traveling
by Change the spelling
travelling
bus
has
Unnecessary verb
apply
drop
significantly ,it has declined from 4 to over Change the verb form
dropped
millions
.
By 2030 the number
of people
who traveling
by Change the form of the verb
travel
car
is expected to reach 9 millions
and it is predicted that the Change to singular
million
number
of train
user
will increase to nearly 5 Fix the agreement mistake
users
millions
. Change to singular
million
By contrast
, the number
of bus
user
is predicted to decrease to 3 Fix the agreement mistake
users
millions
.Change to singular
million
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