In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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countries

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owing

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a home rather than renting is very

imporatant

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important

because it has both sides positive and negative for development. In some

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countries

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it become easy to buy

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house

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a house

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but some

nation

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have even hard rules.

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, owning a

house

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other

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another

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nation helps

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investment. There are so many positive

impact

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such

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as good for investment.

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, if a person is paying $1500 as rent per month and he or she is living there for 2 years

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, in total they have to $180000 as rent but the

house

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selling rate is $200000,

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for that

person

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whould

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would

be easy to own it rather than renting for it. There are so many

advantage

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this

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, on

other

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side

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it has a negative impact

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as if a person wants to live there for a short

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it will be

difficut

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difficult

for them to own it. If a woman is poor

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they will be not able to buy it. For poor people owning a

house

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is difficult. People who are not well educated them

them

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apply

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hard to own

flat

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in other

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. For

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the student

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student

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who

are

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studying in other

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also

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negative

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side. In conclusion, there should not be any rule that man can not rent

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house

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or have to buy it,

still

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

or nation

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type of rule

than

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should give support to

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the publice

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publice

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public

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like loans facilities and many more.

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me, there should not be

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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