In some countries, owing a home rather than renting is very important. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In some
countries
, owing
a home rather than renting is very Correct your spelling
owning
imporatant
because it has both sides positive and negative for development. In some Correct your spelling
important
countries
it become easy to buy Add a comma
,countries
house
but some Add an article
a house
the house
nation
have even hard rules.
Fix the agreement mistake
nations
Firstly
, owning a house
is
Correct your spelling
in
other
nation helps Correct quantifier usage
another
in
investment. There are so many positive Change preposition
with
impact
Change to a plural noun
impacts
such
as good for investment. For example
, if a person is paying $1500 as rent per month and he or she is living there for 2 years then
, in total they have to $180000 as rent but the house
selling rate is $200000, then
for that person
it Add a comma
,person
whould
be easy to own it rather than renting for it. There are so many Correct your spelling
would
advantage
Change to a plural noun
advantages
of
Change preposition
to
this
.
Secondly
, on other
Correct article usage
the other
side
it has a negative impact Add a comma
,side
such
as if a person wants to live there for a short then
it will be difficut
for them to own it. If a woman is poor Correct your spelling
difficult
then
they will be not able to buy it. For poor people owning a house
is difficult. People who are not well educated them them
it Remove the redundancy
apply
is
hard to own Unnecessary verb
apply
flat
in other Correct article usage
a flat
countries
. For Add an article
the student
a student
student
who Fix the agreement mistake
students
are
studying in other Change the verb form
is
countries
for them also
this
is negative
side.
In conclusion, there should not be any rule that man can not rent Add an article
the negative
a negative
house
or have to buy it, Add an article
a house
still
if Add a comma
,still
Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
or nation Correct your spelling
government
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
type of rule than
should give support to Correct your spelling
then
Correct article usage
the publice
publice
like loans facilities and many more. Correct your spelling
public
publicise
According to
me, there should not be rule
like Add an article
a rule
this
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