The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.

The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.
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The given table represents the percentage usage of different features by individuals on their primary device from 2006 to 2010.
Firstly
, in terms of high consumption, making calls, taking photos and text messages communication ranks at the top. In terms of the exact figure, the first in the previously described list stood at 100 and stayed at that place in all the mentioned years with only a 1% dip in 2010. Moving to the
next,
then
it transitioned from 66% to 71% in 2008 and
finally
hit its high in 2010 with 76%.
Lastly
, messages moved from 73% in 2006 to 75% in 2008 and in the final recorded
year
, it was 79%. In the category of moderate usage, engaging in games saw a rise from 17% in the first observed
year
and climbing to 42% and 41% in the next two mentioned years, for the internet the
last
mentioned value holds true in the intermediate
year
, with it being 73% in the
last
year
and it lacks data for the starting period.
Finally
, the least on the list holds for the music play with the observed data in the range of 12%, 18% and 26% of the ascending period and
similarly
, for video recording it holds no information for the initial times and has 9% and 35%
further
in the list.
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