The graph below show the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012

The graph below show the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012
The line chart provides information about the changes in the
number
of several species of turtle in India over the period of 1980 to 2012.
Overall
, Olive Ridley
Turtles
increased,
while
Leatherback
Turtles
exhibited a downward trend. The sum of all species and Green
Turtles
remained relatively stable over the years. Looking into more details, Olive Ridley
Turtles
increased sharply until 1997 and peaked at 1.4 times as much as the initial
number
. After 1997, it didn't exhibit much change.
On the other hand
, Leatherback
Turtles
peaked its figure in 1987 but diminished drastically and resulted
into
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being only half as much as the initial
number
in 2012. Regarding all species and Green
Turtles
both the categories fluctuated between around 1.1 times to 4 fifth as much as the initial figure.
However
, it can be noticed that the former went
upin
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up in
the long run, to become as 1,1 times as much as the initial
number
,
while
the latter declined by 20%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, turtles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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