Topic: Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, people tend the host to follow their
customs
and others think that foreigners may do everything they want.
It is clear that
there are some differences between peoples' thoughts.
Firstly
, if it is thought that guests should get local behaviour and rules, these
customs
will be a great gift for our relatives.
This
makes them feel like a part of society. It is not only saving the best behaviours but
also
something that every host can learn and do in one's home as a good practice. Sometimes a human who goes to another country learns something interesting and does it in his own city. We can meet
such
situations especially when there are conferences and meetings. In
such
times all news is useful. So following
customs
may be excellent for everyone.
On the other hand
, it can make discomfort for visitors to do as a native community. It is not allowed them,
for example
, by their sight or by religion.
Also
, it may be that they just need to be free,
for instance
, in their clothes. As we know, in Europe people wear skirts, trousers, pairs can walk together, go to parks and even stay in each other's houses.
In contrast
, in Muslim countries, crowds wear long clothes, and women and men cannot go together and meet until they have a marriage. In conclusion, both following local
customs
and doing everything as in one's hometown are very difficult questions and every government should choose its laws and allowances.
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