The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs depict the proportion of the five
factors
that make people
happy, which are divided into two categories
, people
under 30 and people
over 30. In general, there are differences in factors
between age group categories
, and three out of five factors
are the same.
Regarding people
under 30, achievement at work is the most popular at 31%, followed by doing hobbies at 22% in the second position. Having a good appearance, traveling
, and other Change the spelling
travelling
factors
account for around half of the highest amount, approximately.
Turning to people
over 30, achievement at work and doing hobbies show a similar position and amount compared with people
under 30 as the top two; however
, there are differences in factors
compared with others, such
as financial security and being with family, which are presented in these categories
at 20% and 14%, respectively. In addition
, other factors
in both categories
are present in similar proportions around 10s.Submitted by frens on
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