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Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Gender
equality
 has been ingrained in
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modern society because men and
women
 are seen as being
on
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 equal standing. Some people would claim that we have reached the goal,
however
, others think
this
 milestone has not been reached yet. In
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 essay, I will discuss the sides of
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 and point out my perspective. There has been a noticeable rise in the proportion of
women
 working in new businesses and corporations.
This
 is feasible because of the paradigm change in society, where
women
 are now valued for their intellect on par with men and not just as homemakers. The concept has
also
 become more popular
due to
 increased media attention and access to improved facilities for
women
, both of which have enhanced the ascent and entry of the more equitable sex into
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society.
This
 has contributed to a rise in the number of
women
 being promoted to prominent positions in the community, where they are now in charge and leading businesses.
Gender
equality
 is still a long way off, though, and there are still some fields in which
women
 are not thought of on an equal footing with men. The best illustration of
this
 is the military, where males are still seen as superior to
women
 owing to their physical prowess. Many tasks still need to be completed. It will take a significant amount of work to attain
gender
 parity, and there is still much to be done in
this
 area. In conclusion,
gender
equality
 has made some progress, but it still
have
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 a long way to reach
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complete achievement,
therefore
 I
beilive
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believe
 it is still a work in progress. The establishment of
gender
equality
 in all spheres of human civilization will take a long period.
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