you own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. write a letter to an owner of an antique shop. In your letter, Explain how you found the shop. decribe the plem that you would like to sell. say how much you would like to sell the item for?

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter with the intent to sell a watch which is really worthwhile to me. It is of my grandfather. I have had

this

watch since the 2000s. It is a special watch with unique features.

However

, I came to know about your shop from my friend. If you would like to buy it, it would be really appreciated. To explain

further

this

watch belongs to my ancestors. My grandfather wore it on a daily basis. It is of golden colour with a round dialer.

Moreover

, It has stones all around the band which shows it is new till now.

Apart from

this

, I would like to sell it because I am a tech-savvy person, I bought an Apple watch recently.

This

means I do not require it now, no doubt I have emotional attachments to it but I do not want to store it in the almirah.

Hence

, I want it should be used for someone who loves antique watches.

Furthermore

, I was searching on the Internet and got to know that it is still an expensive ancient watch, as a

result

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,result

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I would like to offer a price of $100 dollars. If you think

this

price is relevant, please write me back. Hopefully, I will receive your positive response. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely. Raj

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225 words

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