The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given illustration indicates the direction and construction placements of a
school
. The left side is Use synonyms
Use synonyms
school's
map Correct article usage
the school's
in
1985 and the right side is the current directory. Because of the increase in Change preposition
from
school
population from 1500 to 2300 students, the number of classrooms and facilities Use synonyms
such
as pool, fitness, and computer room has risen up. Noticeably, there is a warrant Linking Words
space
in the middle of the Use synonyms
school
Use synonyms
where in
1085, most spaces are occupied.
In 1985, there are two car Correct your spelling
wherein
park
where the big one is in Fix the agreement mistake
parks
rectangle
shape between Replace the word
rectangular
entrance
and Correct article usage
the entrance
exit
. Correct article usage
the exit
However
, the car park is now in the half circle shape at the same Linking Words
space
, and there's only one Use synonyms
carpark
in the Correct your spelling
car park
school
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
school's
library changed Correct article usage
the school's
it's
name to Correct your spelling
its
learning
resources centre with the addition of Correct article usage
a learning
computer
room in the centre.
Another significant change between these two years is the reduction of playing fields. In the present, the playing field was cut down its Correct article usage
a computer
space
more than Use synonyms
a
half. The majority of the playing field is now on the right side of the Correct article usage
apply
school
only; that Use synonyms
space
was substituted by the construction of the pool, fitness centre, and Use synonyms
the
additional classroom.
Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
, there are few buildings that Linking Words
similarly
stay the same: the office and classroom Linking Words
block
. Regarding the office, both years are very similar in size and location. Fix the agreement mistake
blocks
Finally
, the classroom block is at the same location with the increase in storeys from 2 in 1985 to 3 until now.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, space with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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