The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph above illustrates the information the Iceland information from 1990 to 2020.
It is clear that
the percentage
of middle
age
people
is more than others
and the lowest indicator
is youth
between ages
Correct article usage
the ages
15
-24.
During Change preposition
of 15
this
period
, the population
between ages
25-54 increased, people
over 65 fluctuated and children
Correct article usage
the children
percentage
decreased slightly.
It is clear that
the percentage
of middle
age
people
is more than others
and the lowest indicator
is youth
between ages
Correct article usage
the ages
15
-24.
During Change preposition
of 15
this
period
, the population
between ages
25-54 increased, people
over 65 fluctuated and children
Correct article usage
the children
percentage
decreased slightly.
It is clear that
the percentage
of middle
age
people
is more than others
and the lowest indicator
is youth
between ages
Correct article usage
the ages
15
-24.
During Change preposition
of 15
this
period
, the population
between ages
25-54 increased, people
over 65 fluctuated and children
Correct article usage
the children
percentage
decreased slightly.
It is clear that
the percentage
of middle
age
people
is more than others
and the lowest indicator
is youth
between ages
Correct article usage
the ages
15
-24.
During Change preposition
of 15
this
period
, the population
between ages
25-54 increased, people
over 65 fluctuated and children
Correct article usage
the children
percentage
decreased slightly.Submitted by khoshimovkomronbek on
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