You are interested in applying for a new position at your company but have some questions. Write a letter to you boss. In your letter include: Which position you are considering What questions you have about it How your boss can help you decide whether or not to apply

Dear Sir, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and in the best of spirits. Currently, I am working as a Quality control officer at the QC unit.

Moreover

, It has been three years that I am working in your company in the same position.

Furthermore

, one of my friends from the marketing department informed me that our company hiring for the position of Marketing researcher.

Further

this

, I was always interested to work in the marketing unit and

also

completed a couple of online courses. I have some confusion regarding the process

such

as do I need to apply on the company website?, or if I can drop my resume in the HR department.

Apart from

this

, it would be great if you give me a reference and guide me throughout the process. Please let me know what you think about the idea of shifting departments. I await your prompt response. Yours Faithfully, Lisa

Submitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on Fri Jul 07 2023

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