Give the the Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Shopping

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Nowadays, the number of people shopping online is increasing. Personally,

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has the following advantages and disadvantages, which will be described below. On the one side, there are some benefits of shopping online.

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, Buying online will always be cheaper than buying in a traditional way.

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, a phone priced at $631 will be reduced to $544 when purchased online. Because buying online will save the cost of space rentals , electricity and water,

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, tax, ...

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, buying online will save

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time.

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, online shopping allows users to compare products.

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, you can see the difference between

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and Samsung’s wireless charging. On the other side, the detriment of shopping online.

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, you can’t check

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wares you ordered.

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, you buy an item, which is sealed during shipping.

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ensures that the item is new and unopened.

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, You even have to spend more time if you want to return your goods

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because if the item is defective you will have to wait a

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to return them. In conclusion, Buying online and buying in the traditional form will both have their own advantages and disadvantages.

Alexandre Harvey Fri Jul 07 2023

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Give the the Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Shopping

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