Give the the Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Shopping

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Nowadays, the number of people shopping online is increasing. Personally,

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has the following advantages and disadvantages, which will be described below. On the one side, there are some benefits of shopping online.

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, Buying online will always be cheaper than buying in a traditional way.

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, a phone priced at $631 will be reduced to $544 when purchased online. Because buying online will save the cost of space rentals , electricity and water,

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, tax, ...

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, buying online will save

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time.

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, online shopping allows users to compare products.

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, you can see the difference between

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and Samsung’s wireless charging. On the other side, the detriment of shopping online.

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, you can’t check

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wares you ordered.

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, you buy an item, which is sealed during shipping.

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ensures that the item is new and unopened.

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, You even have to spend more time if you want to return your goods

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because if the item is defective you will have to wait a

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to return them. In conclusion, Buying online and buying in the traditional form will both have their own advantages and disadvantages.

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Give the the Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Shopping

Your opinion

Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

when we meet someone for the firt time , we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Describe a person you know who has chosen a career in the medical field. For example, doctor or nurse. You should say who he she is, what he she does, why he she chose this career and explain how you feel about him or her.

Some developed countries have reduced the number of school hours. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Many animals are endangered in the environment. Some people argue that we should only protect those endangered animals that are useful to human. To what extent do you agree or disagree?