the graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who went to the UK for different purpose between 1989 and 2009
The line graph shows how many international
traveller
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travellers
visted
to the Correct your spelling
visited
UK
for different reasons
between 1989 and 2009.
Overall
, the number of overseas travellers who went to the UK
for several purposes increased in 20 years. For certain reasons
, specifically
Holiday ended up as the most popular, Add a comma
,specifically
whereas
Meeting Friends and Relatives was the least widely visited.
At the start of the period, among the purposes of international travellers to the UK
, the Holiday was ranked first,
at roughly 6.5 million
, followed by the number of Business and Meeting Friends and Relatives visitors
were 5 million
and around 3.5 million
respectively.
With regards to the Holiday reason rate, there fluctuated between 6.5 and 9 million
visitors
during the twenty-year period. This
hit a low of roughly 2.5 million
in 2004 before increasing substantially over the next five years. As far as the other reasons
rates, this
country witnessed a rose in million
visitors
and fell slightly in 2009. Over 20 years period, the rate for several reasons
of overseas visitors
to the UK
was unchanged.Submitted by hangry.ng11 on
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