The diagram shows fish pie production line.

The diagram shows fish pie production line.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows fish pie production line.
The flow chart illustrates how
fish
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pies are made. It is,
overall
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, clear that there are two distinct sets of stages in the process: those associated with potato, and those associated with salmon
fish
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. The procedure involves the use of sophisticated equipment, conveyor belt, and workers, ranging from drivers to inspectors. The stages related to potato now begin.
At the first stage
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, potatoes are delivered to the factory, which takes about a month, before they are cleaned, peeled and sliced. The pieces of potato are
then
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boiled and chilled, after which they are stored. The process of working with salmon
fish
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starts with delivery, in approximately 12 hours after ordering. Once
fish
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has been delivered to the factory, a range of additives (lemon juice and salt) are added to it. At the following stage, the seasoned
fish
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is steamed in an oven. The next three steps require direct human involvement: removing skins and bones, inspecting and adding peas and sauce to the product. Before the products are wrapped, stored potatoes should be put in the package.
Finally
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, these ready
fish
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pies are sent to be frozen, and
then
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they are stored and dispatched.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • raw materials
  • initial processing
  • marination
  • assembling process
  • proportions
  • cooking techniques
  • quality control
  • regulatory standards
  • packaging processes
  • sustainable sourcing
  • waste management
  • distribution
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