Your ordered product online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. Write a letter
Dear Sir,
My name is Vipin Tiwari, I'm writing
this
letter to inform you about the damaged product I received from your company.
I ordered a mobile laptop
from your store last
week, It arrived on time but during the ,unboxing I found that the laptop
is missing a battery adapter. Furthermore
, I also
discovered that some of the keys are also
not functional. Being a premium customer of your platform, I was shocked to find a damaged product that too when I needed it the most. I'm currently a master's student at the University of Southern California and needed this
laptop
urgently to finish some of my assignments which were due yesterday.
As the first point of contact, I tried reaching out to your organization's customer support executives but all went in vain as no one replied to my countless email and phone calls. As a last
resort, I'm writing this
email to you to inform you and to request a replacement for the damaged laptop
.
Yours Faithfully,
VipinSubmitted by vtiwari on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite