Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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believe
that their employees should Fix the infinitive
to believe
dress
smartly . some people
believe that dress
smartly is necessary for any Wrong verb form
dressing
jod
.Correct your spelling
job
however
,few companies brought out uniform
.So is it necessary to Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
dress
smartly when working ?
No one can deny the fact that dress
smartly is essential in life which is Wrong verb form
dressing
important
than for insurance companies or fashion , the immediate result it produces is everybody will Correct quantifier usage
more important
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have
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creating
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are attractive
people
know and buy it perhaps the most obvious result of that is
business advantage delopment
. Not thing could be apparent than evidence that Correct your spelling
development
people
dress
smartly have Correct pronoun usage
who dress
domestic
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a domestic
contract
with Fix the agreement mistake
contracts
cilent
. Correct your spelling
client
By
contrast
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,contrast
dress
Replace the word
dressing
comfotable
is easier than .. I think it is necessary when working need appearance.
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comfortably
On the other hand
, if you work in an IT company and you never go out, do you
need to dress
well?a technician argue
that the most important is how Change the verb form
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do
work well their Correct your spelling
to
job
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most important
important
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importantly
dress
well .When they dress
comfortable
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comfortably
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positively
their
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on their
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the effect
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be comfortable
instead
of another
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other
dress
smartly to reach points in job
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the job
a job
personaly
,I am Correct your spelling
Personally
student
so that Add an article
a student
dress
smartly is not important and in my school had Wrong verb form
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a uniform
uniform
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uniforms
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for
this
is a
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an
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to bring Correct your spelling
way
people
closer.
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should choose the right outfit for yourself to Add an article
the job
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development and improve yourself.Correct your spelling
promote
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